25 Oct 2009 — Hulahoop
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Michelle Obama demonstrating her hula hooping skills on the White House lawn.
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1.
Michelle Obama was demonstrating her hula hooping skills on the White House lawn.
2.
Michelle Obama, [who was] demonstrating her hula hooping skills, promoted healthy activities on the White House lawn.
3.
Michelle Obama, [who was] demonstrating her hula hooping skills on the White House lawn, promoted healthy activities.