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10/25/2009 — "hulahoop"

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Michelle Obama demonstrating her hula hooping skills on the White House lawn.
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2) Change demonstrating her hula hooping skills to a modifying clause.

       Michelle Obama, [who was] demonstrating her hula hooping skills, promoted healthy activities on the White House lawn .
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Solution - lightbulb    Reducing Clauses to Modifying Clauses  |  Using Commas - modifying clauses
 

 

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